Almost Cured of Love

by "The Earl"
(Killeen, Texas, USA)

ColorBlind World

ColorBlind World

Here I sit and think "Oh isn't this nice?"


As the heart slows to a dead still beat as I turn cold as ice

She let me down and done me wrong

So I write about her since I haven't the voice to sing a song.

Visions of the past with so many happy smiles

The reality that those won't be around for a while.

Though all she put me thorough angered me to the core,

I realize she was nothing more than a bore...

Forget her long golden hair,

forget her green eyes and how they pierce the soul when she stares

Forget how she'd call my name

Truth is it's over, I'm movin' on and she's the one to blame.

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Dec 15, 2008
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A Distressed Dame?
by: au revoir

Amateur!!!
My 11-year-old sister can express herself far more better. I think the this "writer" became so ecstatic that he finally got over his crush that he decided to write a stale stereotyped corny poem or whatever it is, because everyone else was to busy to listen to his blabbering.
His form of expression and thought totally creeps me out. Maybe that's why his girlfriend or rather
girlfriend-to-be was always so mute in front of him.
I'd rate this a half star if weren't for some other cheesy poems on another site that made me puke earlier.

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