Breakup

by Brandi Barnett
(Clinton, Utah)

I still remember that fateful night,

When you said, "We need to talk."
My heart broke when i saw those words,
You told me we're better of as friends.
I accepted your wish and told you the same.
I felt a tear streaming down my cheek,
I trusted you with my life.
Then, you told me you were in "Love" with someone else
Once again my heart collapsed.
I finally realized what kind of person you were,
Your true colors finally showed.

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May 11, 2008
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by: Anonymous

it's good ... i like it!!
it says how you felt through it all.
maybe you could give some more emotion,
but hey, it's your poem and i'm just giving my opinion ... i'm no expert.
:)

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