Committed Suicide

by Jessica Marie Addario
(Lynn, Massachusetts)


Why would you ever take your life?
I thought you said you stay with me
Just days before that tragic night
You hugged me tight and said I'll always be here, anytime you need to talk
But you took your life and left me alone in this cruel world
I watched as you took a stand
Now your mom let them burn you to sand
I miss you terribly
It's raining because I miss you,
I scream for you to come back
But this will never this happen
I cry and in my mind I see you slowly fading away day after day
I scream come back, come back to me please
But I've got to face the heart-wrenching fact that you are never coming back.

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May 29, 2011
Why I wrote this
by: Quierra Lyons

I wrote the poem because i am Emo. I wrote it for all Emo who have been though a break up of some kind and finally want someone who truly cares about them.

Dec 21, 2010
love it
by: Anonymous

Love it lol

Dec 16, 2010
by: Quierra Lyons

What u wrote will always stay in my mind u r a true emo poem writer! :) 4 that I lov u to death lol thank u for the poem!

Dec 07, 2010
by: Mariah

are you Emo or did you just right that for the Emo's?

Oct 30, 2010
by: Brandon

This Is Great and touching

Jul 29, 2010
I think...
by: Anonymous

This is amazing ..

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