This is really good, I can picture it as a song. I honestly think that you should try it out. If you aren't the musical type, take it to someone who is, this has a lot of potential. It's really well written, my favorite thing I've read on this site.
Aug 06, 2010 Rating
good for you by: Anonymous
You know your an amazing writer and that is coming from someone ho writes a lot!! I've heard and read so much stuff in my life but your writing has made me tear up and smile at the same time because i know exactly what you are saying. Good for you!!