No Longer Invisible

by Jasmine Sanchez
(Los Angeles,California,US)


she walks in a room full of people

she say hello but no one responds
no one pays attention to her

she sits in the corner
crying, all alone
decides to get up

she stands in the middle of the room
she says she'll kill herself
because her pain inside is so big
she can't take it any longer

sadly her pain gets the best of her
and she does it
finally, people pay attention

she is no longer invisible...

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Apr 24, 2010
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beautiful
by: Anonymous

i know the pain of this because i have said before that i was going to but i didnt because of one boy...... but this is beautiful

Aug 14, 2009
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thanks
by: Anonymous

Thanks.

Aug 14, 2009
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Nice poem
by: Anonymous

Your poem is very nice too ... I can relate to it.

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