Please Forgive

by Carmecille Tamayo
(Maya, Daanbantayan, Cebu)

When a wrecked soul I was, our paths did meet.

Though dreary my life had been, my eyes in you have set.
Trusting was difficult, but with you I took a risk.
In you I have seen a flame, my heart braved to frisk.

My heart once loved deeply; betrayed nonetheless.
In a shell I kept hidden, no love can ever press.
A coward they call me, because love I kept away.
Then you came and saved my day, in your arms my heart I chose to lay.

My past never bothered you, despite how ugly and blurry.
You showed me love, made me believe I was worthy.
When I was weak, my burden you willingly carried.
All my past, with the earth I have buried.

Afraid of being weak, my love I never showed.
Looking back I weep, I wish I never cowed.
My love I beg, a chance to me you give.
One chance to love you true. Oh please do forgive.

(Lalove C, you know I am sometime, foolish, often childish, mostly selfish. But despite that, I hope you see how I truly love thee.)

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Apr 30, 2015
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by: Carmecille

Hi Mary,

This heartbreak happened 3 years back. Quite a long time to look back to. I was just able to go back to this page since I was looking for some old articles I have posted on sites way back.

The heart has healed the pain has gone. I look back to that time and say, that was good but that was something I would no longer go back to.

I have moved on and I am not looking back. :)

I will soon be posting articles on my own blogsite.

Apr 27, 2015
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by: Mary

This poem named Please forgive is much touching and I could feel the grief of the writer in the lines of the poem. I would like to know the tragedy that happened to the author of the poem. Please share ICD 10 Coding

Feb 07, 2013
by: Anonymous

Loved it too

Dec 10, 2012
those are my feelings exactly
by: Anonymous

i love it !!!!

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