this is the best one by far. you'r ean amazing writer! keep writing!
Oct 19, 2008 Rating
Keep Writing!!! by: Anonymous
All hail the Dr Seuss of the emo world
Wiggle waggle woggle wee Your suicide is killing me Your base misguided try at rhyme Does nothing more than waste our time
Your razor blades may just cut through All daddy's love's provided you But don't despair, your angst's the norm In fast-food outlet uniform
Keep writing - 'though clearly I'm a jerk The angered pathos of your work Appeals to those of poorer taste Although a massive waste of space
It harkens to the works of Seuss And though ostensively obtuse through this rhyme and how it looks - You'll find a job in childrens' books
Keep writing, emo kid. Your comic genius is matched only by your plethoric vocabulary, transcendent imagination and razor :) grasp of English grammar. All the best. Life's not as bad as you seem to think it is.
Always look on the bright side of life...do do, do do do do do do!
Remember some children are starving in Africa with no money for food, video games or razor blades....at least you have Daddy's money to soften the blow. Keep smiling! :p
Apr 06, 2008 Rating
Emo Cutting by: kiera
This is so great ... I can completely relate to this.
Mar 16, 2008 Rating
.. by: jess
I understand that so well.
Mar 11, 2008 Rating
Razorblade by: jessica
I love this! its so sad! but still.. amazing!
Feb 17, 2008 Rating
da blade by: celine
Hi i really like your poem. It rhymes! ha! Wow And the message too. It's cool.
